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	<title>Comments on: Fiction Wow &#8211; Fifteen Words to Cut to Make Your Work Tighter By Kelly Schaub</title>
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		<title>By: Jay Tee</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 06 Nov 2009 01:53:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>An easier way to find these words is to use the AutoCrit Editing Wizard.  The AutoCrit Wizard automatically finds a whole bunch of these &#039;weak&#039; words and highlights them for you. Plus it does a bunch of other stuff like identify cliches, slow pacing, etc, etc.  I love it!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>An easier way to find these words is to use the AutoCrit Editing Wizard.  The AutoCrit Wizard automatically finds a whole bunch of these &#8216;weak&#8217; words and highlights them for you. Plus it does a bunch of other stuff like identify cliches, slow pacing, etc, etc.  I love it!</p>
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		<title>By: Happy Guy Fawkes and Flamants &#171; Nina Harrington: Harlequin Mills and Boon Romance Author</title>
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		<dc:creator>Happy Guy Fawkes and Flamants &#171; Nina Harrington: Harlequin Mills and Boon Romance Author</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 05 Nov 2009 08:49:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] the meantime I came across this post on the excellent CataUniversity site on a great technique to identify and cut out all of those redundant words that are your favourites [...]</description>
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